tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post8873298185499616259..comments2015-01-23T22:39:23.738-08:00Comments on When Fate Steps In: Chapter Sixty FiveSuper_Kiwihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18000771355101318462noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-16668639001029118732011-07-13T07:35:53.447-07:002011-07-13T07:35:53.447-07:00You are such a strong writer. I am glad that I fi...You are such a strong writer. I am glad that I finished the story. You went with a point of view that I think is simply unique as I have not seen it in any other story (but I just learned of FF and haven't read that much). I never got past the daughter dating the best friend thing. I think it's just so left of the middle. I am not sure if I should love that Richie went with his heart instead of clinging to that unspoken rule when friendship is involved or if I should hate that Richie thought so little of his friendship with Jon that he would continue a relationship with the daughter and even flaunt sex with Frankie in front of Jon. But, that's the best part of writing fiction. You can make up anything and there are no set boundaries when it comes to morals, time, imagination, and even love. With no boundaries, anything is possible.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-61112163124953360372010-12-08T12:57:11.433-08:002010-12-08T12:57:11.433-08:00I laughed (hysterically at times), I cried, I pick...I laughed (hysterically at times), I cried, I picked my jaw up off the floor a few times (especially when Jon realized just who the woman was in Richie's room!!!) This was a great story from start to finish.<br /><br />Genie PAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-24131437334775031402010-11-14T09:02:33.930-08:002010-11-14T09:02:33.930-08:00this story really touched me as my Mom is struggli...this story really touched me as my Mom is struggling with lung cancer. I can't believe how much I cried and laughed. Great story!!!!Jinxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16670851912301152611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-78955464142770526902009-02-12T16:31:00.000-08:002009-02-12T16:31:00.000-08:00Absolutly great, I laughed , cried, got hot,got ma...Absolutly great, I laughed , cried, got hot,got mad right along with Jon & Co. But this story is begging for a sequal, Grandpa Jon, please, pretty please. Thanks for the entertainment.YAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-7522467009353645632008-12-13T17:21:00.000-08:002008-12-13T17:21:00.000-08:00I really loved your story. You had me laughing one...I really loved your story. You had me laughing one minute and rying the next. Jon being Richie's 'dad' is just too funny. Will there be a sequel?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-10129706126815992902008-10-10T18:34:00.000-07:002008-10-10T18:34:00.000-07:00Awesome story. There were times I wanted to stran...Awesome story. There were times I wanted to strangle Frankie but I am so glad I hung in there. What a wonderful ending. I loved that Dot and the whole family came together. Nice for a change.<BR/><BR/>ShaneaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-83616369306568047102008-10-08T18:39:00.000-07:002008-10-08T18:39:00.000-07:00This was a FANTASTIC story! I fought thru the tear...This was a FANTASTIC story! I fought thru the tears the last few chapter. Nice that you left the opportunity for a sequel. Go for it! I would love to read more of your writing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-14574743062380327422008-09-02T01:34:00.000-07:002008-09-02T01:34:00.000-07:00Good good good......<B>Good good good......</B>goooooood girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04966967530389712531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-66080346367856745982008-07-25T08:50:00.000-07:002008-07-25T08:50:00.000-07:00I loved your story. I hope your working on a sequ...I loved your story. I hope your working on a sequel!!!!Tina Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523603360901615673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-64304701724012909492008-07-15T08:24:00.000-07:002008-07-15T08:24:00.000-07:00Really Great Story!!!Thanks a lot and hope for a s...Really Great Story!!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks a lot and hope for a sequal!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-68103526068217449732008-07-10T07:15:00.000-07:002008-07-10T07:15:00.000-07:00OMG, what a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it ...OMG, what a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it even though CC did wind up dying. I would also love to see a sequel to this. Grandpa Jon! LOLAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6753605190499222369.post-5837349110295186902008-07-07T11:43:00.000-07:002008-07-07T11:43:00.000-07:00Oh man!!!! You should sooooo do a sequel to this s...Oh man!!!! You should sooooo do a sequel to this story!! I can't wait to see what a kid with the Sambora humor and Bongiovi/Benson temper would be like growing up! Well, anyway, even if you don't make a sequel, I liked your story a lot and thought you put a nice ending on it. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com